This was our first draft of our film tailor. There is obviously a lot missing, for example the messages between 'capture jack' and Lucy need to be edited in so that they appear on screen. Aswell as this we got feedback that some of our shots, such as when lucy is watching CaptureJack on YouTube were too long and meant that the pace of our trailer was slowed down, making it less engaging. We also need to film and edit the footage that is missing where we hav just inserted text with the title of the shot. We plan to insert these shots with in the next few days so our group can just focus on post-production. Once we have inserted these shots our focus will move to things such as adjusting the colouration of her stripping shots, shortening the YouTuber montage and adding in the message box's and notifications to give the narrative clarity.
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